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12 April 2009 @ 02:16 am
Support Stacie Drabble -- "This Is", for sassy_lion  
Title: This Is
Author: ladychi
Hawt Confirmation: momdaegmorgan
Rating: Adult
Words: 257
Giftee: sassy_lion. Thanks for your bid!



This Is


This is about sensation. About hands over bodies, about fingers touching intimate places. About mouths persuading, seducing, owning. This is about sex.

This is about wearing him like a blanket, his naked form against hers, his erection lodged between her thighs but somehow not inside of her.

This is about learning him. Thick hair and brown eyes. Freckles and quick wit and manic grins. Mood changes on a dime and a love in his eyes that beams more easily than ever before.

This is about... oh. Letting him inside. Feeling the difference, feeling how perfect it still is. Filling her until she can feel whole again, until she stops feeling the unpleasant ache of grief and acknowledges how very much alive they both are.

This is about watching his eyes as he drives into her, watching the way he bites his lips and closes his eyes. This is about listening to the sound of his voice, molten and smooth as he talks to her, telling her how perfect she is, how tight she is, how it feels when she....

This is about squeezing him, punishing little turns of the hips at the end of his thrusts that take him by surprise and spur them on to something more. This is about love. This is about anger.

This is about throwing her head back, feeling muscles contract and mind shattering. This is about him releasing inside of her, pulling out and dripping on her thigh. This is about the poetic and the real.

This...

This is about...

Them.
 
 
Current Mood: exhaustedexhausted
 
 
 
ThroughAnAmberFocus: Rose Ten2 Kissingamberfocus on April 12th, 2009 09:42 am (UTC)
I made a sound that wasn't English. That was so real and deliciously hot.
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:46 am (UTC)
I'm so glad you liked it!
unfolded73unfolded73 on April 12th, 2009 11:35 am (UTC)
Oh, lovely and hot! That'll get the heart pumping first thing in the morning.
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:46 am (UTC)
Ha! That's the idea!
catyuycatyuy on April 12th, 2009 01:44 pm (UTC)
*sizzle*
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:46 am (UTC)
*tosses water on you* I have a few drabble ideas for you -- which do you prefer? Ten or Nine?
catyuycatyuy on April 13th, 2009 03:42 am (UTC)
Ten.
What can I say, I like dorks and he's adorkable.
fid_gin: Doctor-DILFfid_gin on April 12th, 2009 02:02 pm (UTC)
Lovely...the image of the Doctor biting his lip and closing his eyes and talking dirty is...yes, well. Hot, bunk, thud, etc.
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:47 am (UTC)
Well, let me tell you, it was so terribly burdensome to imagine Ten having an orgasm... Ha! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed this!
sassy_lion: david tennant - tonguesassy_lion on April 12th, 2009 02:35 pm (UTC)
GUH. Definitely need a shower for those images.

Thank you!
Chiladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:48 am (UTC)
No, thank YOU!
xebgoc: dtcum1xebgoc on April 12th, 2009 05:08 pm (UTC)
um. *guh*
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:49 am (UTC)
Thanks! :)
momdaegmorganmomdaegmorgan on April 12th, 2009 09:00 pm (UTC)
Hawt confirmation for a third time.

Seriously, Chi, nothing I've read before comes close to how sexy and guh this is. And I doubt anything I read after will either. You've ruined me for all other smut fics, you know that right?

*goes back to read it for a sixth time*
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:50 am (UTC)
Hopefully some of my other fics come close! Maybe the next one will? *laughs* Thank you for enjoying this and for commenting! And for holding my hand last night. It means more than I can say.
mitamitashade on April 12th, 2009 10:02 pm (UTC)
Oh. My. I think that's the hottest drabble-ish story I've ever read. *mems*
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:50 am (UTC)
Oh, thanks for the mem!
helygenhelygen on April 12th, 2009 10:36 pm (UTC)
This is so hot, so intimate, so emotional, so real, that it's brought tears to my eyes.

It's absolutely stunning, and I lament the limits of my vocabulary because I just cannot express how very much I am blown away by it.
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:53 am (UTC)
Wow, thank you so much!
Stephanie Baker: Would you fuck me?kyrina on April 13th, 2009 12:13 am (UTC)
My brain has no good words for this... it's just really really good.
Chi: DILFladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:56 am (UTC)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Viki: Doctor/Rose-The Kissfacing_the_wind on April 13th, 2009 01:05 am (UTC)
Oh, man. Hot, sexy, and also incredibly sweet. I love the repetition in it and the way it makes it flow. The imagery is incredible and overall? Just plain yummy. A delicious read.
Chi: DILFladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:56 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so very glad you enjoyed it.
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Chi: David black and white guhladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:57 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
jules: Rose&Ten by Sunnyjulesndairyland on April 13th, 2009 01:36 am (UTC)
Wow - this is tremendous.
The picture this paints, the vivid images are steamy.
But it is more than just pr0n - the deep emotions and their complexity are captured too.

Great Job!
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:59 am (UTC)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
demented & sad, but social: Who Pornpapilio_luna on April 13th, 2009 02:21 am (UTC)
And I completely missed this when you posted it earlier. *smacks hand*

Really lovely, as usual. I'm a complete failure at writing anything that could possibly be described as short form, so I'm pretty much in awe of anyone who can say so much in so few words. *fangirls you*
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 02:59 am (UTC)
I'm so glad you liked it -- I am a big fan of short and sweet! Writing-wise. Reading-wise -- I like the long stuff!
Lindsay: brownsuit_kissrowofstars on April 13th, 2009 03:24 am (UTC)
This was indeed hot but it was also more than that. It was beautiful, moving and just lovely.
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 05:30 am (UTC)
I'm so very glad it touched you. Thank you for the comment!
Karen: ten & roseeyeconic on April 13th, 2009 05:28 am (UTC)
HOT. Just...hot.
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 05:31 am (UTC)
Thanks!
sunnytyler001sunnytyler001 on April 13th, 2009 08:35 am (UTC)
Wow. Just wow. THIS IS perfect.
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 08:14 pm (UTC)
*grins* Thank you!
Claudiawildwinterwitch on April 13th, 2009 09:03 am (UTC)
Utterly beautiful and poetic; thanks for sharing.
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 08:15 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!
Ascendant Angel: legendsascendant_angel on April 13th, 2009 09:23 am (UTC)
I really like the style of this, and you know it's hot too so I'd give it a perfect ten.
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on April 13th, 2009 08:16 pm (UTC)
*grins* Thank you!
Stacie: DT (panting)sheerpoetry on May 15th, 2009 10:35 pm (UTC)
Oh MY!
This is gorgeous, hot, and beautiful!

This is my favorite:
This is about learning him. Thick hair and brown eyes. Freckles and quick wit and manic grins. Mood changes on a dime and a love in his eyes that beams more easily than ever before.

And I really, really love the style!
Chi: cepia doctorladychi on May 19th, 2009 04:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much for reviewing! I like that line, too!
Sharon: DW - CoT Reviewsazriona on May 19th, 2009 09:58 am (UTC)
Hi! I'm here from the cot_reviews community. First of all, congratulations on your nomination for Round Three of the Children of Time Awards.

We at CoT Reviews try to review all of the nominated stories in each round, and in today's post we've featured your story. Please feel free to stop by and look.

This story completely blew me away - so perfectly written, I couldn't just see it in my head, I could feel it happening. I especially loved the bits I couldn't quote in the main review: his eyes watching her, she squeezing him. Guh.

Congratulations again, and good luck!